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BUT, this is a message or whatever the hell you wanna call it to the people in my english 110 class.  i know that i didnt really git to know any of you all that well, and to me THATS a cryin shame.  the people i was around for that small amount of time, seem like great people.  i wish that i had gotten to know you better is what im sayin.  hehe, a couple fuckin great conversations, a couple good memories or whatthefuckever you wanna say, hehe.  sorry i didnt actually take the time to git to know any of you as well as i wouldve liked.  i wish all of you the best of luck and i hope everything works out the way ya want it to.  take er easy.

akuhn

i didnt write these lyrics, just took  single lines from other songs and put em all together.  wow, i need a life hehe.  enjoy. . .

“hotline.  whats up?”
“i dont wanna live anymore, thats whats up. . .

where’d you go,
i miss you so,
ill always remember everything we’d do,
oh shit im dying,
and i cant stop crying,
all because of you

i never thought id die alone,
hold me like youll never let me go,
it feels like heavens so far away,
how would i know this would be my fate. . .

so cut my wrists and black my eyes,
its a hell of a good day to die.
this blood on my hands is somethin i cannot forget,
to die is to live in her head. . .
there’s a whole right here where my heart used to be,
if you cant get what you want, its all because of me. . .

i didnt wanna be around just to bring you down,
so scatter my ashes where they wont be found,
and make damn sure,
i dont fly around your fire anymore,
so i’m starin down the barrell of a 45,
it’s a hell of a good day to die. . .

i think you could do much better than me,
now your gonna see me for me,
i have nothing else to give,
so remember me as i lived. . .”

BAM!!

“hello?”

“hello?”

“I KNEW YA WOULDNT DO IT YA NERDY BITCH!!”

ICP, FORT MINOR, SUGAR RAY, KORN, SALIVA, BLINK 182, JOHN FUCKIN DENVER, THE OFFSPRING, SOUNDGARDEN, HAWTHORNE HIEGHTS, ESCAPE THE FATE, STEREOSIDE, SENSES FAIL, TAKING BACK SUNDAY, AUDIOSLAVE, SHINEDOWN, HINDER

I honestly do not really see myself using this weblog that much in the future.  The only reason i can think that I would would be to keep in touch with people in this class, which sadly, I just do not really see myself doing that much.  Too bad.  They all seem like great people, espescially those who I was around.  Other than that, i dont think ill use this blog after this.

There hasnt really been a big change in my attitude during the quarter.  The emphasis did seem to shift from research to opinion though very quickly.  In the research paper, the emphasis on making a point out of your opinion came from the end, while as the course moved on, it came more to the forfront.

It seems to me that the general rules of an op-ed are that of persuasion.  Other than that, its publis information, protected my the first ammemndment, so the rules dont really apply.  Try to git yoru point accross, and just go from there.  take fo example, the op-ed in the new york times bashing india for flipping out over a recent attack on their country.  anything goes really

I recently read an op-ed discussing Barack O’Bama’s reasoning and plan for a college football playoff.  It was very organized and well thought out.  It first discussed the system of how things are, then why his plan should not be put into action.  I thought it was very well put together, and it actually made me think that the man isn’t as bad as i once thought.  hehe.  I tried to model my op-ed after this one, as far as the modeling system goes, citing more personal example though. . .

Jarold kuhn       nov. 24/08 engl110

 

 

Rough draft Op-ed

 

I am choosing to write my op-ed over the total lack of initiative in the class room.  Not from the students, but from the teachers.  The testing system in our country any more is nothing more than a joke.  We wonder why other countries are doing so much better than we are, and it’s the education.  The student body as a whole knows not much more academically the day the graduate than when they were in kindergarten.  Why?  The testing system going on in our schools now.

 

            In polls taken across the country by nine through twelfth graders, the level of retention in the classroom is next to zero.  Students do not study to learn, they study for the tests.  These standard tests that are given out to everyone are what teachers teach for.  After a student passes through their own state’s individual testing system, the work load decreases.  In ohio, this test is taken in the tenth grade.  The tenth grade!  Why the hell are you taking a graduation test as a sophomore?  That’s what everyone studies for, that’s what the teachers teach for.

 

            This process of thinking is what has taken America down to the bottom of the education systems across the world.  That is why Americans are losing their jobs to those who are more intelligent somewhere in another country.  They work cheaper and with more efficiency than that of an American worker.  They are more educated in their field so they have more of an idea as to what is going on around them. 

           

            What does this guy think should be done about it?  I think the testing system should done away with and teachers should regulate grading based on random “pop-quizzes” over the entirety of the course they have taken up to that point.  Either that, or find ways that what they have learned in the classrooms can immediately be used and applied in the real world.  This way, a student would be forced to elearn what they have been given, or fail.  They wouldn’t memorize and regurgitate as they do now.  Actual learning would occur.

 

            Why would the actual learning occur here?  Many students have seemed to do better in a “sink-or-swim” kind of system as opposed to the memorize, test, forget system.  My mother is a teacher at the highschool that I attended, and the way she taught was that of the “learn and immediately apply” system.  Granted, she’s a band director.  Still, what she teaches in class, most students who I have seen come through her class, have come back years and years later, still knowing how to play their respective instrument or sing a song or whatever they did for her.  She teaches you something and then IMMEDIATELY applies it what is needed.   This way she teaches students to learn.  She doesn’t teach just to pass and get out of her class, make you someone else’s problem.  I still know everything I learned in her classes, and I doubt I will forget them any time soon, because I had to apply them, I had to KNOW how to do what it is she wanted me to do.

 

Another great teacher I had was my English teacher.  With this man, you had to know, because you never knew when the test was coming.  At one point, we had a test, thirty-seven days in a row, all over different material.  Then again, same class, went four weeks without a single grade.  No exams, no papers due.  NOTHING.  This forced us to learn because we didn’t know when we would or would not need it.  This man did not teach for the OGT, he taught us so we would know how conduct our English papers and be able to deal with English classes at the college level.  He was a great teacher. 

 

            These two ways of teaching have shown me how much of a joke other classes who teach to pass really are.  It is a growing problem in our society, but because of a lack of care from political leaders, there’s isn’t really a way to change it, outside of individual classes

 

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There is one concept when writing that many fail to acknowledge is really all that important.  This is the audience, or the group of readers who are taking the time to read what you wrote.  Major categories include the popular audience, and the academic audience.  While these two may be somewhat similar in the sense that an educated person can be apart of the popular audience and vice versa, there are very different approaches to how they should be addressed.  For example, to the academic audience, one should make a definite point of of representing both sides, and maintaining a sense of bias.  On ht e other hand, when writing to the popular audience, it is easier to let your opinions flow and show your bias toward one point or the other.  Academics are more official while populars readers is much more laid back, because all you have to do, is prove your own point, so it can be very one-sided.

So our English 110 class has to do an analytical research paper on some topic pertaining to the concept of “spaces and places.”  I decided to write mine on neo-Nazism in America today.  This paper briefly describes the history of neo-Nazism in our country, and tells both sides of the argument.  The argument here is basically, “is neo-Nazism the terrible thing that people always see on the news?”  My paper describes the negative effects of this mindset on our area, and also tells of these people’s point of view, and what they stand for.

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